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by arimi

schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had forgotten about this story! I wonder what will happen first, they'll mate or he'll speak...
person chantelle
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So so mushy...but I loved it! I'm glad Lex got to see Angel, and I can't wait for another escape attempt, or at least for his secret to come out. That'll be a fun chap, seeing Lucien's response to a talking Ri. Thanks for the update, this chap made my day a little better :)
Mushy is the best.
person Lyron 713
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying your story, it has an unique view of a dragon's world. Love Lexis Rivers and his brother Angel too. Am looking forward to reading more about them. Yeah and Lucien and Edward also.

PS what happened to the formatting on the last two chapters? Such large spacing.
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's mushy, it's sweet. but its damn appropriate! and it's good!!! *wipes a happy tear*

This is the best way for them to reunite!

Knowing Angel, and knowing Lex. they both would have of cause fought tooth and nail to find the other after being so rudely seperated! well, the fight tooth and nail part was for Lex. I can, totally, see Angel crying his eyes out non-stop. And dominants, being the soft hearted ones towards their Ri, would of cause get Angel to meet Lex again.

And so... the next day... THEY REUNITE! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!
Lex doesn't have to go through the trouble of running away now. All Lex and Angel have to do is to hold onto each other now and never let go... Those Ro' being the Ro they are, wouldn't have the heart to separate them... not so soon anyway.

There are bigger things to think about anyway.

Like WHEN is Lucien gonna discover that Lex actually has much more intelligence than he lets on? The day that happends.... man... BOOM TOWN! I wonder if he'll be angry with Lex.
I mean, being the dragon he is, it wouldn't take much to get into on this Lex Rivers. but... who in their right mind would think of a Ri having a normal life outside that island.

Whoots!!! okay! hyped now! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds!
and I LOOOVEEEE the WAFF! been reading way too much angst, all this sweet and fluffy ness, and all this 'destined mates' kinda thing is really making me happy~~~ *floats* more please!~


- nekoii
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i liked the update, but i was hoping that lex would have stood up more to the ro. he's not going to become a meek love-smitten submissive is he?
person BlueSilver
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... Angel's so cute! I wanna read more!
person Passing Reader
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved both chapters of this and am happy to see you back in action! :D
It's nice to learn a little more about lex and now his brothers in the picture! I can wait to see what he does next! On a side note, the spaces in your story are just a tad long and its a little difficult to scoll through without accidentally by-passing text ^^; Thank you so much for sharing, until next time! ~Passing Reader
person Dyrn
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I can't stress that enough. AMAZING! I read the first 13 chapters in one go and my only critique is that there aren't 13 more chapters for me to read.
I will be eagerly awaiting the next update of this story until you finish it. Thank you so much for writing this story!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I groaned so bad when the story ended.... XD I demand love declarartion from Lex now.....The domination dragons are way too hot.. *drools*
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait till Lexis start talking and starts giving the dominants an “education”.