rate_review Reviews

This is the best story I have EVER read. So unique, so interesting, so AMAZING. Please never stop writing. I was surprised and disappointed that this is your on ly fic. It is so well written I thought you would have many more. Please update soon. I will check for an update each day now!!!

Hi. I've been enjoying your story, and would love to see more. Buy why all the white space in chapter 13? I'm reading off a netbook, with a small screen, and all this white space forces me to hit to pgdn button, and abuse my keyboard, too often. You wouldn't want me to turn into an abuser, would you? :P

please please please update again soon! I really like your story! It's so unique and absolutely wonderful!!! I can't wait until lucien finds out that his mate can speak! I think that it was just right how they both reacted!! I want to know more so bady!

Hooray, Angel's back! That poor baby! I'm still loving Lex's free spirit; hope he doesn't want to stop running away too soon now. It's very amusing to see him fighting with himself in his mind xD

I really like your story! It's well written and the plot is quite original. You've really put a lot of thought into building their world and you're still adding more and more details to it. I find myself not being able to predict anything of what you have in stock for us so I'm planning to just sit back and enjoy the ride. I don't mind introducing new character, the so called new Ro with their Ris. I hope you'll show us Angel's side too though for now I hope we'll see more of Lician/Lex for it's obvious that something is building there. All in all I'm very happy I found your story. Even if I don't subscribe every time I want you to know that I'm always lurking around and patiently waiting for an update. Good luck ~.^

I love how your main character is a submissive, and yet isn't totally devoid of character or spunk; he has some attitude, and even if he is overwhelmed by his dominant's dominance-ness, he still maintains a strong sense of self. and he seems totally kick-arse, especially when his younger brother is concerned. Which is awesome, 'cause so many authors will stereotype sub's as...totally and utterly submissive and wimpy and uninvolved.
So yeah...totally worth reading. I hope you next chapter is up soon! and maybe with more written lines than spaces?

Not mushy at all. It's kind of comical how you tried to pull off with so many interruptions. Kinda fun.
I like Lex's inner battle, he's like a lost child with too much knowledge but don't know what to do.

Awesome.

Very happy to read your new chapter >_<. I'm really love this story. I always want to know how Lucien will know about his blue eyes RI...Hope to read more in the near future.

Thanks so much for updating. I absolutely LOVE this fic. I'm almost embarrassed to say I check it daily for new content. Can’t wait to see where you take the story line. So far it’s fabulous.