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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great. And only 4 chapters?? Aww, we want more... please?? Those two are hot. I would love to see more between them. Nice job.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the last chapter and though Ben now has declared her his I still don't know if he's just aggressive in bed or like to be the one deciding what to be done with her. It would be nice to have a final chapter hearing her thoughts about how he's 'manhandling' her. And if you're not, remember to change your resume to complete.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well he sounds really sweet but like a user as well I can't wait to see how this will turn out. Please update soon
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looks goood.. maybe longer chapters? .. whats chez ben ? :S
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you going to update soon?
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good start. One little thing, you named her Anna, and he called her Jenny at the end. I look forward to more.