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for The Desert World

by shadelostwolf

schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*~oo, very interesting. There was some confusion in the characters though, some times I couldn't tell who was speaking what line and where the characters are exactly. Otherwise, I really like the plot and the characters has a nice consistency ^_^ ~*
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH, IT WORKS!!! Sounds good!!! Please keep on writing.
Greetings
Sandra
person Zelasii
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it xD
Please continue.

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