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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome! i like the plot and ur characters! my only advice is that u work on the transition between each POV. it flows well one minute and then theres an awkward, sudden shift that may or may not confuse readers.
other than that, excellent work!
other than that, excellent work!
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it
i cant wait to see what happens next
please please pleaseee update soonnnn
i cant wait to see what happens next
please please pleaseee update soonnnn
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start! I'm interested in seeing what you're planning for this story :)
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally just watched Charlie Barlett tonight. I assume that is where you got your title from =)