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I swear you have the most fun authors notes and replies. It's almost worth it just to read them. However the story is just to good to pass up. Oh is he going to get his clothes and crap from the wicked bitches house?

Nice story. I enjoy your writing style, it has this kind of attitude to it, yet you do such a good job with it that it doesn't hinder any of the softer feelings and atmospheres of the story. If that doesn't make sense, then sorry, but I can't really find the words to describe it. Your style just has a kick to it.

I like all the characters: Adrian, Isaiah, Atia. They've all just got something to them. I think Isaiah is a big sweetie, and I feel for poor Adrian and all he's gone through, and Atia...
I don't know. He's got this weird crazy ghost vibe or something. Let's just say he's mysterious and end it at that.

Oh, and the whole hospital scene between Adrian and Isaiah with Adrian's inner lusty thoughts was hilarious.

-- “I believe your aunt signed that we could give you meds. Would you like a Dayquil? Or can I get you anything else?”
--You can pop my goddamn cherry, PLEASE

Every other line had me bursting out laughing.
I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

The beginning chapter is enthralling, I'm excited to read the next chapters.

Wow. This story's just getting cooler and cooler. Anyway, I, for myself, love Atia much more than any other character here. The nurse-guy is kinda nice, but seems somehow... boring to me. Yup... a supernatural boyfriend is so much more sweeter. Heh. :D Keep up the good work!

Ah yes, those that mess with the groove get... ungroove-inated... :P

Great chapter, as always. Yay, Atia! I really luff him, no idea why...

Another great chapter. I'm liking Atia more and more... The aunt...well... If she falls off something really high and never again wakes up to see a sunrise, I wouldn't complain.
I'd love to be able to point out something earth shaking in your writing...but I'm just too damn tired to appreciate it properly.
Anyway, good job, looking forward to more.
::adds to list of Stalked Stories::

what is up with the vision dude? one minute he's all affectionate and then he throwing people down the stairs.
oh, and i'm kinda wondering if I can get a more detailed description of the nurse. you know body type and everything

Ah, poor Adrian. Isabelle really is a complete bitch. Good chapter :D

Oh. Dear. God.

I started today. Ate chapters one and two. Devoured three. And nearly cried when there as no four.
GET WRITING.

-loves-

Sure you have a style, heh. Everyone does. As far as I know, everyone types shit in a different manner. :D Anyway, now I'm really intrigued. I wonder if Adrian died. I can't wait to see more. Update soon! It was a very long time since I have seen an actual PLOT somewhere, and one really interesting at that. Who the hell is Atia? Oh my.. Hereby I forbid you to have any more creative blocks. :P