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for So right (and yet, so wrong)

by Tommyknocker

person freefall1310
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so wrong yet so hot:D yeah i'm a sick girl:D only the name jeremy puts me off a little cause it's a guy who's an utter jerk that i know but your story jeremy is noooooooothing like him:D waiting for the sequel!=)
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOLZ! I loved your author's note at the end. 'Don't like, don't read; have a prob? Fuck you.' My sentiments exactly. -claps- Good for you. Once again, interesting characters, I find Jeremy's inner turmoil highly entertaining. He tends to listen to the devil on his shoulder instead of the insistent angel, doesn't he? -chuckles- Anywho, good chappie. Kudos! -BiaBS
person just reading randomly
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. It was interesting even though it is a bit disturbing if you try to analyze it but still good.
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I thought there was more! You are evil for doing that! More please!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude... I thought this was the second chapter or something....
person scott s.
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should definitely do a sequel to this. it's a really good story and i'd love to see more.
person Steven
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story though it really was a tease, please write more and ignore the flammers if there are any. As for Thomas I suppose there are some 12-year-olds that are naive. I love pacman too so that also made me happy
person Kim
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this. Wouldn't mind more if you're still up to it!
person Jetfire
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you're perfectly right in all your author notes. It's just fiction, not like its gonna happen and I thought it was good. And so what if its twisted, better twisted then normal is what I always say and hell I'd like more of this story, you damn tease. So you'd better write some. Plus I think you're very brave putting stuff on paper that goes through sooo many peoples minds. So well done you.

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person DaisukeKaza
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read such a good fic like this in a long time. I would love to see more soon! (maybe something like Jeremy introduces Tom to a few concepts before outright fucking him)