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for Friendly Neighbor

by Chandrima

person maccam
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a nice neighbor..lol
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great story. smiles
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I really like your story and i look forward to reading more of it! I do have one suggestion though, make your chapters longer. I'm kind of verbose and i know not everyone is, but for me.....the story would work even better if the 'action' didn't stop in the middle. With that said...please update soon...*S*

psyche b
person LOVELUST
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it. So hot. Please update soon. Excellent story.