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by frolichorror

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schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. i likes. i likes a lot....

i like the whole internal dialogue thing the most. great characterization! can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an asshole of a 'boyfriend'! >.<

"Can he actually use his brain? Or did his neurons get expelled together with his cum?"

Best. Wording. Ever!