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Can you update please? my brain is getting itchy from imagining all the possibilities of what could happen next. i will continue to check everyday as your story link is in my faves now.

Nice. You already have a twist thrown in there. I so did not see the werewolf aspect come. Though it quite pleased me. love those werewolves. :) Please update again soon.

Oh I loved this! It was amusing and very well written. A break up that started from a donut *snickers* Yes, Greg was kind of an asshole so served him right! Hm, can't wait to read more :)

wow! I totally didn't expect Jason to be what he is, but after re-reading it, all the signs were there and it makes total sense. Masterfully done. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

This story is great so far great humor and the idea is really fun. Im excited to see what happens!

Weary of someone means you are tired of them. Wary means you are unsure and suspicious.

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Okay, mini tutorial out of the way. I found this very amusing and refreshing. He took control, placed more value upon himself than a comfortable but unhealthy relationship, and made a grand exit. You have a very nice voice and the construction works well. You had a character really turn on a dime, but handled it perfectly. The logical progression of internal dialogue read believably and entertainingly.

I wanted to clap for him.

Getting a little tired of somebody-is-always-beating-somebody slash and this is as welcome as a clean spring breeze.

KD

Great job on the first chapter; I'm looking forward to see if Greg let Jason be the dominant one!

haha, this chapter had me laughing so hard!
Gah I love the sarcastic way this is written and that the
other guy was so completely oblivious!
He thought he was leaving him because of a doughnut? haha!
I look forward to more!

Really good start. Will keep an eye out for this fic from now on ^_~

Yeah, take it like a man!
Er... give it... o_O;

I likeeeeeeee. Moarsoonplz.