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by frolichorror

person Avernion
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I laughed a lot! :3
person gillie
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, just lovely! The entire story is just bliss. Jason is an interesting character, love all of his "seme #" facts. They make me laugh!! Please, more! Much more!! Just one random question. Daisuke's name. Is it pronounced, dai-su-ke, or dais-ke?
person romanticfae
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute and awesome!
person redlightspin
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue with your story
person Hello
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very cute update. Hopefully, Jason will become enlightened with the fact that relationships aren't based on facts and of what he makes of it.
person jeazard
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fact: I am a werewolf.

Well. That was unexpected.
I like the approach though, less mystic, more, dunno, "normal", werewolves well adjusted into modern socity.

Nice one, keep writing!
person Avernion
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER ONE
"Greg continued in a way that sounded like he did not only deliberately walk on a mine field, but he was also jumping around on it, while singing happy children’s songs."
I so loved this line. And I loved everything about this chapter! Great story :D
person Avernion
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"May she get flees."

Loved it. I laughed a lot reading this story. Great work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Ha ha. X3
person Hello
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! Please update another soon.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I like the flow of the story and how your main character's viewpoint is so strong.