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by Madhater

person uandme
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww don't stop there!!!
i like things from his point of view :)
yay for more!!!!
person als22
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far..update soon plz!not to be mean or anything and Im sorry but the 'O's kinda break up the flow..its hard to read..but hey I still love it!
person uandme
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this so far.
more soon please :D
person Zelasii
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update O___O
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please update soon. ^_^
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what's wrong with him? Its mean not to tell. Please?
person ammeh
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need to work on grammar, spelling and punctuation.