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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do update soon!! Computers are evil.. This is an awesome story!!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be a brutality honest review: First, this story has some potential but the Grammar needs works especially the using "" instead of O's and try to make it more interesting. Listen I'm not trying to be mean or act like a troll and I truly know that writing is hard(just putting on paper is hard let alone editing it) but I think this story needs work. I hope you're not offended by my review but I want this review to help you in your writing.
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and lokk forward to the next chapter.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was looking under your recommended reading list on your page, and i wanted to see what one was about. "A Much Prized Pet" was the one that i wanted to try, but i didn't know it was a harry potter story, as i only had the title. i had to run a search in like 10 different archives to be able to find the story. so, if you could, could you please tell us the authors of the stories or what archive they are in so we can find them? thank you.
ASOTA
ASOTA
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so good but you are killing me with this mystery0_0
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
those O's are kind of annoying... but good story! update soon please!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you were getting a lot of grief for spelling and grammar errors and I wanted to say that I'd be willing to beta for you if you liked.
LadyRyann@gmail.com
LadyRyann@gmail.com
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. It is interesting, but there are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish your chapters were longer ;___;
This story is just that suspenseful
This story is just that suspenseful
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I'm still curious to see why he's locked in his room. You have a few grammer errors but other then that you're doing well =) Can't wait for the next update.