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for The Debt

by DarkerDesires

person Reike
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man this is good!
Seriously that guy is fucked up!
I wonder what he's got instore for his poor slave next...mind you
the guy doesn't seem to mind too much about his predicament.
Nice story!
~R~
person JAD
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oo very sexy. Wonder what happens next...
person JAD
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start and very sexy.
I'll be interested to see how this goes.
Keep up the good work!
JAD xx
person Anja Artillery
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I'm really interested as to where it's going. You've goot good writing skills :)
person Reike
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah that was soooo hot!
Woah what a chapter!
Love it!
~R~
person Reike
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was even hotter than before.
Gah the "Master" is pretty fucked up haha!
But hey, makes for hot reading!
Loved it!
~R~
person romanticfae
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummm x] more?
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh now this is good, hope it's not a oneshot!
person Saminada
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! That was really HOT! I loved it! :D

I hope there'll be more to this soon! I can't wait!

Thanks alot for the story! *hugs*