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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I would love to see it continued. I really like all of your stories.
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I think your work is wonderful, steamy and well written! I enjoy all of your oneshots :-)
Thanks
Writer11377
Thanks
Writer11377
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, you could totally get published. Write for Ellora's Cave or put some of these hot scenes in a suspense novel and you're good. :D
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love how sympathetic he is, but firm when he needs to be. And it's clear she really does have feelings for him. Aww, despite all the stuff on the side, they do have a relationship, lol.
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, thank u so much for updating. I love love this story. Its so hot. Wow that scene where was punishing her with paddle was so hot. Thank u for writing it. I can't wait for chapter 5.
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I adore this story. Excellent work and so fucking hot. Please update soon. Thank you for the awesome story.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooooh you have GOT to update.
this is so hot and and and... oh wow.
this is so hot and and and... oh wow.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
soooOOOO hot!!!! i actually liked the first bits- with jenny and tyson more. but it's all SO good!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great writing skill. I was a little turned off by the slutty girls and the 'daddy' business, but this story is pretty hot.