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for His Castle

by Daisystar

person jas
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow he is so mean! i like it so far, i was wonder what she looks like and is kyle ever going to be nice?
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more. Although I do enjoy this story, I think that slavery and all types of child abuse are totally wrong. However this is just a fictional story and not real life. Keep up the great writing.
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope that Kay and Mimi can find a way to help Daisy so that she can escape and find a way back to her brother and sister. I look forward to reading more.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I am glad that Daisy couldn't feel much, but I am sure she will when the drugs wear off. I look forward to reading more.
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I can't wait to read more. How old is Daisy? and what will happen to her brother and sister?