rate_review Reviews

Lovely. You really do need to make it longer than a couple of chapters. Do you realize what kind of world you have made up? You probably do since you made it up, but still! This is the world where people expect to die next day. And please cut the sex with Jefferson, it seems almost tacky. Liked the history lesson, poor poor girl. I like Tulls's style. Maybe you should divide your chapters they are long and I would think the story is longer.

very nice again :)
I like how there was just enough background/history info.
his dealing with abuse seem realistic and hard. everybody seems 'human'/good.bad/multifaceted except the iguana guy seems tooooo nice. I hope there is a surprise coming up for that character. :)

No 3 to 5 chapters is too short for a story like this. This is probably the weirdest and most original story I have read on this website. I wish you would go into how splicing began a bit more. What causes it? And Erran's past too. Such a pretty name.

I love the first paragraph so I went and read it again. It makes it seem like somebody's experiments went wrong. How could they better themselves by being animals? I can understand fears of inadequacy, but in the same instant I can't understand being animal as a form of adequacy.

I liked it. Would like to have a little more history with the splicing thing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very nice. What a wonderful idea, and you painted it vividly.

Thank you

This is an interesting story you have here. Very dark, but then that is what I expected going into it since it was a 'nightmare'. It reminded me of the Island of Dr. Monroe, and I sorta used the images I got from that movie to fill in how I thought people looked. It wasn't pretty. :p Anyhoo, I like the dynamics here: The main character being a human and the rest of the folks transforming into animals. Cuz usually its the other way around. This line: They say it was a virus, like the kind that’ll make a guy chicken turn into a girl chicken or whatever if there’s no other chick-chickens around. Had me rolling. I don't know if it was intended to be funny, but it was, at least to me. Oh, and I also liked that the teenage boy got back at Anubis. The Bastard. I hate rapists. So, anyway, enough with the jabbering. Its good. I'll be back for more. :)

nice new world :) I like animal people :) also like the characterization of the main guy.

i really like the concept. especialy all the details...like the kitten baby/pet and the vegitarian thing. interesting story!