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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww...*pets erran*
be a good boy. don't do bad things to yourself.
i enjoyed the chapter!
be a good boy. don't do bad things to yourself.
i enjoyed the chapter!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this is another intense update! I truly love your sense of humor and your warped characters. You're doing a great job with them. Thanks so much for your updates!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. The world is really believable and so are all of the characters.I especially like Tulls, his bsing is just too funny. Can't wait to see where this one goes, and I hope Erran gets over this relapse. He was doing so much better before! (or at least I thought so) I am greatly anticipating the next chapter ^_^
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snuggles* Oooo you're such a soft woman!!! So fluffy and warm. Sooooft!!!
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nice chapter! i like that plastic surgery twist. it was unexpected.
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nice chapter! i like that plastic surgery twist. it was unexpected.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a beautiful chapter. You did a great job on the trauma part - and sent chills down my spine. Thanks!
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha. "I can't hear you. I'm sleeping"
Glad my review was so heartfelt. Love the interaction b/w Tulls and Erran. They are so funny. "Don't you want to end on a Tulls note?" Hilarious. About his mental condition, he seems like he is watching himself from above, he is not with himself. Very detached.
How did he heal so quickly so much?
Glad my review was so heartfelt. Love the interaction b/w Tulls and Erran. They are so funny. "Don't you want to end on a Tulls note?" Hilarious. About his mental condition, he seems like he is watching himself from above, he is not with himself. Very detached.
How did he heal so quickly so much?
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are very sweet. You and I work well together. You write my favorite story. I read your favorite story(?)
The plastic surgery was a surprise. But also if they have so much tech, why can't they figure out a way to stop splicing. They don't want to?
How would it feel to be pretty?
The plastic surgery was a surprise. But also if they have so much tech, why can't they figure out a way to stop splicing. They don't want to?
How would it feel to be pretty?
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THis story just keeps getting better and better and better! I LOOOOVE the conversations, you as a master at those!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this is seriously one of the best stories I've read. I love the premise (the splicing idea is ingenious), psychological profiles and personalities, and the plot. It's so subtle, and the sex non-gratuitous. I'm definitely looking forward to more of your writing. Thanks for sharing it!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing!
The descriptions and general tone of the story are great! Really made me get into it.
I love Tulls...actually I like the relationship between Tulls and Erran.
The end of the third chapter made me laugh!
Love the story!
~R~
The descriptions and general tone of the story are great! Really made me get into it.
I love Tulls...actually I like the relationship between Tulls and Erran.
The end of the third chapter made me laugh!
Love the story!
~R~