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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I love this story! It's amazing. So creative, so different, so awesome! You have a wonderful style of writing, and your characters are so real and interesting. Really great work!!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeay! Update! I love this love-story and the characters... great work!
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such an endearing chapter - and I liked how you inserted the section about his father. Interesting door opening - if Erran's father does indeed buy him, it presents the possibility of whether Erran will still love Tulls if not bonded to him. Erran and Tulls are coming across so multi-dimensionally, and I'm intrigued by the way you're handling the master/slave/love dynamic. Thanks for the update!
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6
Glad to see Tulls take control. All Erran needed was tough love, tough to be his reminder about his time with Botelli, but love all the same which he never felt with Botelli; it feels like Tulls is weaning him off of Botelli.
I knew Tulls must have been hurt by Erran's actions, but never understood it. His acknowledgment helped Erran, he has the power to hurt someone now, not just be hurt. He has power now, not just choice.
Glad to see Tulls take control. All Erran needed was tough love, tough to be his reminder about his time with Botelli, but love all the same which he never felt with Botelli; it feels like Tulls is weaning him off of Botelli.
I knew Tulls must have been hurt by Erran's actions, but never understood it. His acknowledgment helped Erran, he has the power to hurt someone now, not just be hurt. He has power now, not just choice.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgomg more pleeeez. i wuv this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! more more more! -bounces in invisible adult-sized high chair-
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lol keep up the awesomeness! woooooot wooooooot!
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lol keep up the awesomeness! woooooot wooooooot!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story today and I'm in love haha. I just read the first two chapters and you are doing a GREAT job. I like this story so much i had to stop before reading chapter three to tell you how AMAZING this is. this is a unique story line but you are doing a WONDERFUL job of keeping it interersting. Keep up the good work!! Back to reading!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay they are finaly getting somewhere :D Thanks for the updates!!!!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is definately an interesting story. Keep up the good work.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved your this treasure of the tidbit! FINALLY Tulls takes Erran... thanks so much. I re-read the whole story last night and thought of how you said this whole story would be something like 5 chapters? I love your sense of humor, juxtaposed with the psychological studies. Hope you'll continue to be inspired to build your next update soon. Thanks again!