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Lol at naddy, so funny

that was cute Naddy and the Garretts. nobody is immune to them!
I think that I enjoyed the fight to much... that was awesome. ;D
very hot, but I kinda wish there were more Nathan and Joseph.
great job!

I like your characters in their own way. They all have their own charm and I think it's also nice that not everything constantly is an ideal world. This would also make the story probably boring quickly. I'm really curious how it goes on with Adam and also I find it charming that your characters have the courage to openly show weakness also if not always entirely voluntarily.

In chapter forty-two you wrote soup rather than soap when Roth takes Adam to the shower after the fight between Adam and Nathan.

The slow chipping of Adam’s sanity is interesting. He cracks, fights or gets in trouble, and Roth rescues him - it’s a cycle for him. As wonderfully written as it is, Adam has somewhat become predictable in a sense. I do believe Roth’s infinite understanding comes from that - the fact that he knows Adam is breaking apathy bit by bit. It is a wonder what might happen if Roth were not there to catch him, or rather Roth might need him instead.

Lovely as always.

LOL! Technically it becomes 'soup' mixed with blood and water. Heheheh. Shit like that cracks me up.

Thanks for the catch! Changed on post and doc.

KD

Jay, as a post script, this kind of behavior is very predictable. Individuals have separate timetables. My friend's son blows up like this every six months almost to the day. You can mark your calendar by him.

KD

a fight then hot sex...boys will be boys! yummy!

God, I think Adam needs an electrician to get his wires untangled, poor baby. Roth is such a strong person to be able to deal with Adam's problems and get them through it without losing himself into the fight.

good chappie

another awesome chapter! just read the las four and loved them, I'm still a huge fan of this novel