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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Anon
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi, what do you need emails for?
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
he finally snapped out of it, weird.
poor Adam and Roth. are they ever going to have smooth sailing.
loved seeing Ridge and Jason again. :)
person debbie
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I keep coming back to this time after time, because it's such a damn good read. Then I get bummed out because a new chapter hasn't been posted. But, Rome wasn't built in a day. . . . so I must persevere patiently while I wait for your genius. . . . don't let me miss the end of this one please!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
having some trouble with ur email and signing up for final chapters. I am addicted to this story. It's a beautiful story, with some of the most unique (and rather troubled) characters i have ever encountered and i will be eternaly grateful to be able to follow it through until the end. more more more.
person Jane r.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was able to catch up on your story, and it's great!
person mcdgoddess
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what just happen? Did Adam just get back his right mind or is this some type of front. Its going to be a long, hard road for these two. Adam just can't seem to get a break.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been trying to send you the email, but its saying that the address doesn't exist...
person lazyluna
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good grief, that's heartbreaking! Looks like Adam and the family are in for another painful journey! Love seeing the family around!
person mcdgoddess
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is that the right email? I keep getting messages that its wrong.
person Shinigami
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Hi,

I've really enjoyed reading Before You so far; you've written the characters and plot so well. I can't stop reading it!!! I realize that you specifically stated not to ask for the final chapters in a review, but the email address that you gave unfortunately did not work with my carrier. Are you going to post the final chapters online? If not, would you mind sending them to me via this address (risingscarab@live.com) ?

I wish you luck in your future writing career and with your publisher.