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by KristinaDalton

schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BB, nice to hear from you.

OA, do try drawing the new man. I love it!

KD
person Rose
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hot and sucky all at the same time. Although mystery guy does match Ria description of what Roth needs. Poor Roth. You're very mean to that sweet baby. Lose a girlfriend, turned down by a potential female lover and jerked by a one-night male.

Does this make me a fan now?
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope like hell so, Rose. You make me belly-laugh.

KD
person lavcea
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you so have to update this. while i'm loving 'until you', i'm thinking before you is going to be so hot. i have the biggest crush on roth and i want him happy. can you write me as his love interest? black girl, nice build, cute face...i for one think it will work...LOL. great job and i can't wait for more.
person LuckyBlackCat34
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Moly! I'd have to agree... poor Roth sure is getting dumped on, poor baby! Hopefully, that just means he'll end up even HAPPIER than Ridge and Jason (except, don't think that's possible, but whatever).

Now I'm soooo hooked! Who is Evan really? Why is he forcing people to put a price on wanting to sleep with him? Who picked him up? Why'd he sleep with Roth in the first place, will he ever see him again, and when oh WHEN is Roth going to get some TLC?! me thinks this Evan is a seriously troubled fellow.

Will you update Before You on AFF? After Until You? ...
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I think you just tore my heart from my chest.
Poor Roth!
That guy was mean.
Really. Fucking. Mean.

But oh my god.
This was... amazing. It was simply amazing, I don't know what other words to use for it, as they all don't even cover it.
Continue.
Please.

xxx
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