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by KristinaDalton

schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...I'm kinda surprised, kinda not that Roth had sex with a male. And what glorious sex that was. I can't wait to see if he finda Evan. Something tells me that he will...he is after all a Garrett man!
person Jem
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Roth ;___; I'm seriously loving that we're getting to see more of him though =D
person Reike
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hoohohhhh!
wow! oh my god!
ROOTTTHHHH! That was so amazingly hot and then like pow
he just up and left him like that!
Woah! I really want more of these two, the chemistry they have had me drooling haha!
Great work KD!
xxx
person JAD
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot and sexy but....OMG I want to kill the bastard for doing that to Roth!
Quick! Call the Garrett clan - they have to beat on that stupid pretty-boys ass!


And if they don't....I will..................................
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOH...it looks good so far...can't wait to see what else you have planned
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, and yum. More sexy Garrett men to drool over. I'm very interested in "Evan Blue". He makes me want to study him and find out why he did what he did to Roth. Poor Roth! The man wants someone comfortable and he is going to end up drawn to/obsessed with someone who is going to turn his world on its side.

Ready to read whenever you are ready to start this book.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, delightful. Give me more.

Near the end, you wrote "Jason" instead of "Roth". "Jason's heart jerked within his chest", to be precise. :)
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Fixed it.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I think I like the sequel even more than the original. Thanks for writing this, it was a hot read.
person cfweber1b
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Jason & Ridge and how Roth always watches over his brothers and their lovers. How dare someone treat Roth that way. whoever the man is - well his loss- Pets Roth- you deserve better than that.