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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person sylia
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i think mystery guy is so going to rock roth's world. YAY!! i feel so bad for roth when he was always alone in while watching everyone else fall in love (YAY jason and ridge) can't wait to read more

sylia
person Darkladyknight
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start to a new story. I feel for poor Roth, but well, making it easy wouldn't have as much fun. I look forward to seeing how this one goes, I can't wait to see what's going to happen between Roth and the mysterious man!

Dark
person Datenshi
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished Before you, and I fell in love with Roth the first minute I "laid my eyes on him". :D After that I went to your profile to see your other stories, and then I saw it. A story with Roth as main character! I was like OMFG!!! YESYESYES!!!! *jumping up and down, and doing happy dance*
So I begun to read, and almost died. This was to hot to bear! (well... almost :D) I already like that sexy nymph without a name. I cant wait for Roth to find him again. :) So, waiting eagerly for an update!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wanna know something funny wife? =P lol. Just minutes after reviewing 'Until You' I get up to get an Amp Energy Drink since Starbucks is closed and I run into my roomie. And I say: "Roth is so sexy. He's a doctor and he's bi! We could like role play but for real! He could be my doctor and I'd be all 'Dr. I hurt everywhere.. make me feel better.. right here on the table" LMAO! I didn't realize that I said that out loud till she gives me this 'Eww' look. Hahahaha..


Anyhoo onto the real review.....



Roth is amazingggggggg! Everytime I read about him I listen to Burnin' Up by Jonas Brothers. I'm addicted.. But I can't wait to learn more about Evan Blue. I can't wait to know his real name. What could it be?! o_O Hopefully something cute like mine. Did I ever tell you my name? Well its Leon (no lie) but everyone calls me Leo cuz I'm an animal in bed. Hahahaha! J/K! Its just Leon..


Amazing chapter and I'm sorry my attention span is like 3 seconds! But I'm gonna rate you *1*2*3*4*5 STARZ!!!!!!


xo Passing_Breeze


person nonalor
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start, is it going to be another long story? I hope so! I love your writing! Nona
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, ladies, this will be an industry-standard length like Until You. And, it's my next project.

I love that you love Roth, too. He's my pet.

KD
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Didn't think that would happen. Poor Roth :[ His life stinks. Anyway, I adore this. And 'Until You'. You're an amazing writer.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you're writing Roth's story. I've fallen just as hard for his character as I have for Jason and Ridge. I really can't wait until you start posting this regularly. I have high hopes for our favorite tall, muscled doctor. Already I can tell this will be another mind-blowing, heart-wrenching love story of yours that I just won't be able to get enough of.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! for a sneak peek, that was very drama filled and hot.
Roth just can't get a break, poor thing.
I'm giddy with anticipation for more. :D
person loving
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of this, roth just isn't lucky in the world of love. What is going on with him that everyone he meets, it just can't or won't work out. I don't know what was up with evan( or whoever he was) but I know that he is missing out on someone that you don't meet everyday.