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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Susan
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just as good as the first time I read it! Really looking forward to this story.
Susan
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Roth...He likes to have everything under control and when he finaly finds someone, the guy is unpredictable. I like It.
person lazyluna
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mojo KD!!!! Adam Reed, indeed! :) :) Only slightly confused... is Reed a doctor, too? Or is he homeless?
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're writing Roth's story!

Curious to see where you'll go - and this new mystery man is intriguing.
person Aoel
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You're writting Roth's story! I love Roth to bits... Adam seems like a challenge. Hopefully he'll make Roth let go of his need for complete control. Can't wait for more. I didn't think i'd see this story till it came out at the end of September. This makes me soo happy:)
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* Roth was/is my favorite character. I obsessed about him during UY and now he's getting his own story. He's got the strength and character of the Garrett men, but because of his experience, he has a more fragile air. Not like Ridge, and I do like Ridge, just there is something about Roth. Or maybe it was how you wrote him from Jason's POV. I'm ecstatic over this new update and can't wait for more. As much as I don't want to like Evan/Adam, or whoever he'll turn out to be *grin* I agree that Roth needs this kind of shake up in his orderly world. And Adam somewhat won me over when he carried Roth to bed. So yeah, loving this story and I'm a total Roth fangirl.
person blueberry34
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello!

My friend turned me on to your stories (UY is AWESOME), but she's what I like to call a "hardened yaoi fangirl" ... NOTHING freaks her out/squicks her. Anyway, the first thing she mentioned about UY was that she wanted a Garret brother man-wich with Jason filling (no joke.) So, of course, after she told me that, I was all like, huh? Gotta read this! And now, yes, I'm an addict, though I rather like this Adam fellow. Oh oh!! And I'm so excited!! Roth being pursued? I like the idea, only because I think Roth-baby needs some serious loving and cuddling and not just any man is good enough! Plus he needs his boat rocked! So rock that boat, baby! :)

Great stories, absolutely love it!

BB
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was one of the best opening chapters I have ever read! I have to say your style is brilliant in that you introduce "Evan" as essentially a mystery...and at the end of the chapter, we know even less than we thought! Truly a refreshing read, especially the awesome sex right off the bat! Terrific work, and I can't wait to keep going!!
person Amanda
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I took your word of advice and I'm reviewing your work. I should be working...but just had to read any latest stories. Glad to see you up dated your new story. Keep writing....maybe I can read the end to this one.......Still a shitty thing to do to your readers....its like reading a mystery novel and someone ripping out the last chapter.....I was almost not going to read the newest chapter to your new story...Was going to just write you off. But new story....new day!
Amanda
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhh!!! I can't wait until the next chp. I love the cliff hanger, can't wait to see what happens. Will this pick up right after Until you or a couple of years or months later??