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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person crazyforkakashi
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Roth. Cant wait to see what is next.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your trying to kill me aren't you, when you end the chaps like that.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like Adam all ready...he seems like he is going to give Roth a good run but Roth seems like he will do the same for Adam...so far they seem like a good match. I enjoyed this chapter...Roth is a good man...now I'm looking forward to see what kind of man Adam is. Great chapter and looking forward to your next update!
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When Adam pciked Roth up I was like, "WHOA. I didn't know it was physically possible for anyone to do that." xD (I forgot that he was just as much of a giant as Roth is.)

Hmmmmmmm I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
person novojo 2001
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read Until You and I so love your writing style. But I must say that Roth is my favorite character. I am so glad that you are writing about his life. Sorry for my bad english. It is not my first language.
person Rose
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Due to weather, I won't be too evil this time. However...Adam Reed? Beautiful, mysterious jerk is named Adam Reed? Maybe he's a jerk because his name doesn't fit his looks? If he has a sob story to tell, can Roth hit him? Afterall, it's not like he can't fix whatever he breaks.

Still waiting a bit on Adam. Right now I like him as much as Damawitch. Although I'll give him a rating of 7 for being able to lift a Garrett man. That rating drops to a 4 if he doesn't give Roth sex (or at least the greatest massage ever and breakfast in bed)
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea, it's like to two for one special. Two sexy mex together. Adam, hmm, he may be a bit of an ass, but at least he apologized. Sounds like he must have been burnt by someone with money. Poor guy is just taking it out on Roth. He'll learn that the Garrett men get what they want and will make that person VERY happy.
person Jensie
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well isn't Adam a little pistol. I hope some of the characters from UY make a cameo appearance here and there.

Can't wait to see where this is going.
person Reike
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh I'm loving this.
I love the chemistry between Roth and Adam, it's like you could see the sparks fly!
Adam's gotta be a big man to pick Roth up...woah!
It's great how he's keeping Roth on his toes.
Loved it!
~R~
person lavcea
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know you're wrong for the teasing. i want more. and where can i buy the books?