rate_review Reviews

This story sounds great. I can't wait to read more.

Hey, I'm so happy you are writing Roth's story now. He's a very interesting man and I wonder what will happen to him...they're meeting by surprise again, aren't they? I'm looking forward for what will happen to them.
Greetings
Sandra

I'm confused and a little iffy about Adam.

I be honest. I was skeptical about reading this mainly because I read "Until You" or should I say I attempted to read "Until You." I end up skimming most of the chapters to see if it improve but eventually quit. I just couldn't sympathize or even empathize with any of the characters. Everyone was just so damn perfect. Bad things happens to them but they, themselves, are inhumanly flawless in character and physical features especially Ridge. I also felt like the story was just carrying on and on just to show how perfect they were.
Perfect family who just happens to be rich and also very accepting. Perfect relationship with no real fights that real couples have. When something does happens, it always seem so overyly dramatic like a kidnapping and it's, of course, never the leading character's fault. Ok, now I'm just ranting unneccessarily... Sorry about that. I do like this story so far. The first chapter shows a lot of promise and so did most of the second chapter. I'm really hoping you work out the depth and faults of your characters and of course the plot of the story.

Poor Roth! I'm glad he finally came across his man. Way too short a chapter and really looking forward to more!

First of all I would like to say you are a brilliant writer, unfortunatly I will not not be reading this story as I don't want to get emotionaly invested and another great story and then not be able to read the last chapters. I pefectly understand why you are not putting up the final chapters of Until You, and wish you all the best.

Regards,
Kat.

Well, Kat. About a hundred and twenty readers are continuing Until You gratis via yahoo group. If you missed the extended deadline, apologies. I cannot post the end of BY pre-pub. However, will be starting a mailing list much earlier. My biggest mistake on UY was thinking all my readers reviewed, and going private suddenly wouldn't cause trouble. Now I know to account for all the silent readers.

Take care and happy reading elsewhere.

KD

Excellent as always. I love the build up. Wanted to make sure I got on the list for this one, I didn't get on time for Until You. :(

can't wait for the full story

finally know the name of the mysterious guy. i love him....he's cool. and i read Until You but i didn't review and i didn't want to bug you about the ending since you said something about that and i'm sure you got a lot of people bugging you and getting annoyed. but i don't mind and i can understand that you did what you had to do. by the way i loved Until You, it's one of my fav and so far i love Before You. i'm glad that Roth finally found someone after his wife? died.