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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person lazyluna
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...oh no! Not again! Geez, poor Roth... er, well, I mean, other than blindingly hot sex, you know... poor Roth. Every time Roth gets vulnerable it seems Adam is there to step all over his poor heart! Ah well, can't wait for more!!!!! Will Roth agree to be sex buddies?
person lunasune
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Adam seems really standoffish. I hope Roth breaks through his shell soon.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Someone find me a club, I'm going to beat him to death with it. And then I'm going to shove his card up his ass. Maybe I should do that first. Boy does the man run hot and cold, what the hell happened to him to make him that way? Three chapters in and I'm already addicted. Keep the smexy crack coming. No pun intended.
person cfweber1b
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Reaches for tissue. damnit- first with Jason's story and now Roth- I want to kick Adam hard- ie very good - Ilike Roth how protective he is of his family I would like to see him find someone who will cherish and take card of Roth's big heart
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrr...I want to know what Adam's deal is! Loved the boy sex, but it is the emotions that have me all of the place. Roth is so sweet and to have 'fuck buddies' thrown at him, damn. I mean, I'm all for turning his structured life upside down, but I don't know about this. He just has so much love to give. The jury is still out on this guy, but from the reference to him in UY, I guess I'm just going to have wait patiently to see where this is going and patience isn't my strong suit. :-P
person sylia
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG "fuck buddies" NOOOO! poor roth. i hope roth's relationship gets better soon.
person Amanda
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dang!! That was hot!
person Duelriel
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved Until You- just read it the day before your deadline- and I have to say that this is fantastic as well. I'm excited to see how Roth finds a new lover.
person Everdean
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo you little minx. just giving us teasers to prevent the true cravings lol i love it already but then Roth was one of my fav characters from Until you.
person Ryoko81
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...again great...I really love to read more of those 2 to...the more the better ^_^.
Seems to become a very interesting couple themselves...