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Wow, Adam is so a bastard! Poor Roth! I hope he gets the type of relationship he wants. Look forward to the next update.

Man, I am really interested to see just how this story plays out. That Adam could be so uncaring when it comes to sex, does make you wonder just what his history is. Can't wait for the next chapter, and stay safe.
( look, I'm actually reviewing before a story is completely done updating, its amazing :P )

reviewed on the first chapter and just getting around to these three, adam can be an asshole but their's just something about him that makes you want to know him and all of his secrets. I can't wait for the next add because i'm loving this.

Wow, this love thing of Roth's is getting quite complicated. I don't know how to feel or exactly what is going on. I hope something gets explained soon...but then again I am impatient for true love to sink its vicious fangs. BTW I actually live in Savannah and I really like that this story is set so close to home! I hardly ever read stories set in Georgia!

Ack, you always know when to stop! I want more, NOW. Just kidding. I love the anticipation you build, makes the chapters even better. Not that they need any help on that front.Still don't know if I want to hit Adam or hug the poor guy. He is definitely in need of a Garrett.

Aw man, talk about a cold raw deal. Although I look forward to what Roth will do to convince him otherwise.

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Wow - thanks for sharing the story. You're good! This is the first time I've read your stories, and I love how you keep the dynamics fresh, with dialogue clean and flowing. (PS: typo in CH2 - "profession courtesy" = "professional". I noticed a couple more, do you want to know?) You refer to "Until You" - is this related to "Until You" at all? Because I've not read it, and "Before You" seems to stand well on its own as it is.

very hot, you write amazing smut!
but what the hell is up with this Adam guy?

First off I’ll start by apologising
I’ve been following ‘Until You’ since like chapter thirty
Only I never reviewed because I was too shy to
There was so much I wanted to say but
I didn’t really want to because I’m sure you’ve heard it so many times before.
Well anyways
Your works are amazing I can’t really put into words how much I love them
The characters the situations it’s all very nail biting its almost like a five star film playing on screen
Anyways I just wanted to thank you for a good read and wish you luck with ‘Before You’
I’m expecting wonderful things from it
I hope I didn’t sound too cheesy, it wasn’t my intention to boot lick but just to let you know how much I appreciate your works.
So sorry if I don’t review often it’s not that I’m too lazy or I’ve stopped reading it’s just I don’t know what to say
So thanks again!
Ps. If its possible to get the final chapters of ‘Until You; still I would be ecstatic but if it’s too late I don’t mind, I know I waited an awful long time to say anything, sorry about that.

I really love your writing and was totally enamored with Until You. I am glad you continued with Roth's story and I am excited to see where it goes. Hopefully his good nature and good upbringing will lead him to a fulfilling life!