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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adam's a frickin roller coaster.
this little break down has got me very eager to learn about his past.
great job!
person Reike
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah KD what a heart wrenching chapter.
I kinda want to hate Adam and beat him for being like that to Roth but at the
same time I wanna know why he's like he is. With the sick people he seems like a really nice
guy.
Lovely chapter!
xx
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahaha, the plot thickens!
Enjoying this as much as Until You.
Lookin' forward to the next.
~Dinooooes
person cfweber1b
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Joseph! but have a feeling that Roth is already seriously hung up on Adam.
person Redbird
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Its so weird to see this style with new characters, I can't wait to find out more about Adam.
person MariaR
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I have read Until You to ch. 58 and I would love read the rest of it. Is it possible to read the rest of the chapters somewhere?


I love the start of Before You, and am waiting for more chapters. I really liked Roth in Until You, and I'm hoping that he will find a lasting love.

-Maria-
person MariaR
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I have read Until You to ch. 58 and I would love read the rest of it. Is it possible to read the rest of the chapters somewhere?


I love the start of Before You, and am waiting for more chapters. I really liked Roth in Until You, and I'm hoping that he will find a lasting love.

-Maria-
person Laena
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, i think even more then your last and you know loved the last one. you are the best!
person novojo2001
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Adam! What happened to him in the past? He must be hurt badly. I think Roth needs him as much as Adam needs Roth.
person Rose
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So close! Adam was this close to having me like him. To bad he quickly turned into a prick again.