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by KristinaDalton

person Jenn
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I love this story just as much as the last. I can neer wait for the updates. I haven't had the chance to review yet and i apologize. With going to school and your story being the last one I read at night I am jusy ready to close my eyes after the excitement of reading the update. I will try to get better at reviewing. I can't wait to see what happens with Roth and Adam. I am confused as to why Adam was crying and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum... I liked the chapter, Although I'm confused why Roth is mad, I think I may know but I'm not sure. Anyways, great chapter, and I work with the elderly and really they are great people to be around.

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person lazyluna
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh, so now we get to find out what's shoved that stick up Adam's rear end... can't wait to see where this goes!! Lovin' it! (and my goodness, if you can't fall in love with Roth, you must be crazy or really broken!)
person roxas357
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love it!! i cant wait til this story is completely done at the end so i can re-read it over and over again! lol i love the angst!!
person jazz
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Adam is kind of a jerk but I guess people have their reasons. I really like Roth though, he's so sweet! It makes me all warm inside, and I like Joseph too! This story seems like a good one I've enjoyed is so far, cant wait for more! :D
person moonsun
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! Roth deserves to be happy!!! Good job!!!
person aznpixie
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why but after the first chapter I thought that Adam was a member of the group Evan Blue, then when I went to read later on I was wondering why a Rock Star would be working at a shelter. I had to reread the chapters to get that Adam was a normal person who used "Evan Blue" as an alias and not actually a part of the band... It probably would have been kinda awesome to have a doctor and a rock star together. Anyways, it was probably because I started to read your story at 1:00 am. I am looking forward to the next installment ^_^
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm dying to know more about Adam. Great chapter...can't wait to read the next one.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm methinks I'd rather see Roth getting to know Joseph better rather than Adam. For some reason it just strikes me as a better fit xD

Here's to hoping for Roth/Joseph!
person JAD
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, want to see more!
I like the sound of Joseph...
Lovin' it as always!