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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Rose
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* Okay, I guess a past like that would explain such a bad attitude. I'm not an Adam fan yet, so he better start sobbing and give Roth great sex and a cuddle. Keyword: cuddle. None of this whamming, bamming and taking off stuff that Adam usually does.
person JAD
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, secret, dark, emotional past!
Ooo, this is getting exciting!
Love it
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth has got his hands full with Adam. He's got so much pain in his past, that I only hope Roth can break through it. I'm actually kind of surprised Adam told him all of this, I guess it was a heav burden and he needed to get it out. Great chapter. Can't wait for your update!
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was great reading Roth's point of view during Ridge's kidnapping. Great work...can't wait for your next update.
person JAD
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I love how you've linked int in to Until You.
Hmm, this Adam is definately a shady character now. More interesting times ahead...
Yay!
person loving
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So is roth willing to let her go and completely, I don't think he is quite yet but I do know that he can get past it with the right person.
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful and well written i hope to see more of your work.I caught the last bit on the other story you did on this site.hope to see more from you.Brovo.
person Sami
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I loved the ending of Until You, and I'm loving this story too. Roth is awesome. I love how complex and ALPHA the Garrett family is always.
person lazyluna
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Poor Adam! I take it that's obviously NOT the end of his story?!
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, poor boy. (I feel like I'm saying that every chapter so far) This is definitely getting more interesting by the post. Love it!