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by KristinaDalton

schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this story is really turning out to be something. I hurt for Adam and Roth, and I can hardley wait to see where you take us next with this wonderful story.

Dark
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, you have here. You sure do have a way with plots that I wish I could steal. It's no wonder you've gone as far as you have.
person Natalie Logue
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! I knew adam was a BAMF! And now he is so sad and in need of some Garret LOVIN!
person anon
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love th story so far! keep the goodness flowing as always!
person jane r.
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo sorry to hear about the flooding. You have a great story!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We can wait, just be safe.
person jazz
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats so sad! I just want to grab Adam and give him some candy or these Chinese sweet dumplings with vanilla custard in them. That always makes me happy :D and then he went and got even more traumatized! Killing people cant be good for your psyche. Okay kinda get used-to-be-a-jerk but now is just lonely-grieving-haunted Adam. Looks like he's in need of some super sweet Roth lovin :D
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dun, dun, dun... Adam's past is finally coming out. very interesting.
can't wait for more.
stay safe!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poo. No Joseph, then. Man, that would have been so cute~

Oh well. I suppose I can still hope xD

Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person Reike
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Adam!
A killer for the FBI, wow, no wonder he was hiding from Roth!
Is he gonna do a runner now that Roth knows?
Lovely chapter KD!