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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Reike
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, those two have some chemisty...damn!
Haha well...making out whist driving...I think that should be in the hazard perception test for driving!
The bit with the women made me laugh!
Loved it!
person Seekah
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth is too nice. I wouldn't have forgiven Adam so easily but he is a cutie despite how annoying he can be (ending of Chapter 2) Gosh! He plays too many games. Roth seems so perfect--a doctor helping at shelters, rich, perhaps handsome, social...just nice! Love him already. Adam too, I guess; he keeps things interesting
person loving
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take your time, everyone knows that gustav is on his way
person Li Nika
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You seem to have really bad wather lately. I hope things calm down soon, take care of yourself!
person ray
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you are safe from the hurricane *Hugs*
person novojo2001
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Both are dealing with so much hurt from their past. Can't wait for more.
person asha
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just recently came back to finish reading your story Until You andfound you had taken it down. You wrote that if we asked we could be included in the mailing list and was hoping it was still open. Ive realy ejoyed reading your work and just started reading your next one Before You. I hope that I can stll be put on the list. Could you let me know please?
person Aida
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's startig so great ! I'm totally hooked by this new serie !Aida
person J42
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - love where this story is going. Ridge's rescue seemed brief, but I'm glad he was safe. Personally I'm rooting for Roth and Adam - so I'm definitely hoping you'll do well with the storms soon, because ending this update with Adam's story about being a ghost is such a wicked cliffhanger. :D Take care and thanks for the lovely writing!
person Seekah
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is good. A grand a night? I know that 'Evan' didn't take the money, but Roth assumed he would and for him to even consider paying it is insane. But 'Evan' was an interesting character. Today has been an awful day so the ending was just as confusing to me as it was to Roth. What was 'Evan's' point in sleeping with someone to see whether they value him or not by pretending to be a prostitute? Does he know Roth from somewhere? Well, this has peeked my interest