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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person crazyforkakashi
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Roth is a relentless bastard. At least he is geting some loving. Keep it going. I just know something is going to happon soon. Good or bad?
person Jane r
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth is such a cutie!
person seiren
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so much fun reading your stories..
Why is Adam so unsecure about his relationship with Roth? And I think that Roth's love for Jason is just a brotherly love. Isn't it?

schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! You tell him Roth! Maybe Adam needed someone to brake down his walls. Maybe everyone has been letting him hide for so long he doesn't know how to do anything else. He needs a family hug.
person Natalie Logue
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I like Roth but I must admit it just isn't "Until You." Maybe somethiing will happen and i will turn my mind but as of now i think Jason and Ridge's story is much more provocative and fulfilling. Keep writing!!!
person kalush
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter I enjoyed it
person loving
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those two are really something together,a firecracker and match ready to light it. They will most definitely be two people to watch.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, great you keep on writing!!! A hot chapter and hot guys. I love roth and I hope he'll find his luck..
greetings,sandra
person lazyluna
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOA MOMMA! Hot!

I'm so glad to see that Adam and Roth are coming together. I loved Adams little "I found him first," comment, totally made me giggle! I hope that they stay on this track and Adam doesn't back out and get scared. I'd have to agree with the other reviewers... seems like he needs a lot of Roth lovin'! (and cuddling and happy good Garret things!)

Anyway, I hope you don't get slammed with more bad weather, but stay safe!!! Safety before stories!!

LL
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully this will help them both come to terms with some on the things they are struggling with. Can't wait for more!