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by KristinaDalton

person Rose
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Roth would act like a typical G man. Up until now, he hadn't shown his family colors, so it's nice to see him finally put Adam in his place.

Although now that I think about it...do Garretts ever date normal people or do they have some sort of beacon for lovers with more baggage than LAX? If it's the latter...hello, I'm a neon light and am not amused at being passed over for hunks!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh could I be on the mailing list, please? You do still have my email adress, right?

If not, could you leave a quick reply and I'll shoot you a quick email? :DDD
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Adam's a stubborn one, isn't he?
Chapter made me smile though, after having a bad day.
Hope the storm passed without too much damage, and that you're all right and stuffz.

~Dinoooes.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting...i didn't expect adam to be an assassin? for the FBI. and i love this chapter because of what adam says to Roth about being a relentlss bastard or something like that. oh i sent you an e-mail under the name marsmars_07@hotmail.com about the thingy you just said about the thingy....sorry i'm tired since it's like almost 1:00 where i am. so just let me know about the thingy for the thingy....lol i don't know if that makes any sense.
person JAD
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, "it's a family flaw"
Hell yeah!
xx
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, kd.

Will you be including the people who are already in your previous yahoo group for Until You. I should think all of us would love to be in this group as well. At least I know I would. Pls include me in. Thanks !
person KD
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, I can't just transfer the list. (That would really help me, actually.) It must be made by hand on the new group. If it's someone I know for certain wishes to have an invitation, someone I keep in contact with, I'll just add. However, people I don't really 'know', I don't want to spam with unsolicited invites. It's more difficult to pull email from this review thread, because many people request inclusion without providing email. I have gone to profiles to try getting them, but it takes more time and only works about half the time or less.

Emailing me is the best way to get yourself on there quickly.

KD
person me
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was really looking forward to Roth finally finding someone although for a moment I felt that you might actually have him drop Adam and go for Joseph....but after Roth found him and got the truth out of him I’m actually looking forward to what happens to the pair.

There is a bit of a mistake in grammar "almost didn’t know how (to) react”. Sorry if I a bit anal about this a bit.


person Reike
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh man the tension between those two.
Adam's got some serious issues...I'm hiding under my desk now...lemmie know when
it's safe yeh?
The relentless bastard had me laughing, well hun, that's a Garrett for ya!
Loved it!
person KD
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me,(feeling weird addressing another person like that)I have looked for that mistake. Could you please tell me which chapter and about how far in? Things like that are so easy to overlook, I have trouble spotting them.

Thanks!

KD