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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person JAD
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth really does like to make things difficult for himself.
Still, be boring without it :D
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot!
it really is cute that Adam thinks he can resist Roth... haha.
person nonalor
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi again I just want to say how much I love your writing. I love this story, too. Will you please keep me on your list of people to send upda tes to when you know longer post the last chapters. I love all your writing that I have read so far. Nona
person Jane r
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Freakin' WOW!!!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the chap, love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person loving
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth just can't take no for an answer and as much as adam says no, he can't resist.
person J42
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love our dark and handsome hero Adam - and Roth. What a guy you have fleshed out there! Found the Christmas scene really moving - thanks! I was wonderful about the mysterious gift - for a moment, I thought Adam left something for Roth. And I'm really wishing they would adopt Adam soon. Where did Adam disappear to? *sigh* Another kill?
person JAD
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw beautiful...and all linking in again.
My you are a clever soul aren't you ;-)
xx
person Reike
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww Roth, that was another beautifully written chapter KD.
I'm awaiting the storm...I have this sneaky feeling that Adam wasn't being
entirely truthful.
Love this!

R
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth is amazing. I hope he finds happiness with Adam, if Adam continues to be open with Roth. They both seem like they have stuff in their past that they are still healing from, hopefully they can heal themselves as well as each other. This seems like the beginning of an interesting relationship. I can't wait to read more.