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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Jane r.
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Roth
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best chapter so far in this story. Just...WOW! I'm glad that Adam finally broke somewhat but I have a feeling something is going to happen soon to push him further.
person sxchampagne
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is wonderful and this last chapter (#15) was so incrediblymoving.
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These two are so highly emotionally charged. It's all or nothing. I'm loving it!
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with these two men. It's like two broken hearts coming together to be whole again. I envy their journey to each other. Great chapter!
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter and it's sad that Roth was thinking of using morphine. yay!! get to learn more about Adam, even if it's was he had told Roth. I can't wait for more.
person J42
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KD - firstly thanks for the double post!! What a treat. Secondly, you really nailed these chapters. I love the mature relationship that your men have - with mature insights and emotions. And I loved the ending: "I went to the place my family burned to death and buried it. That way, the two things that killed me could at least be together." Thanks - hope you're doing well with the weather, and that your muse will strike again soon.
person Reike
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, Adam's an emotional land mine waiting to go off!
Boy do those two have chemistry. I love Roth sooo much!
These chapters were great =D
~R~
person Jensie
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intense and slightly confusing.......I'm wondering were this is all going to go when it starts to move forward.

Very intriguing...
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think the boys are in for a rough ride. But in the end it will be worth it.

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