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by KristinaDalton

schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks!! I think that was one of the troubles my beta caught last week in a ms to date review. But, I really appreciate it. :)
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took me a few to catch back up, life has been busy and I got behind. I love how the story is going, I really love Adam and Roth. But I always wonder when Adam is going to meet the rest of the family. Anyway keep up the great work!

Darkladyknight
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, Roth certainly has his work cut out for him with Adam.
“Roth Garrett, you’re an arrogant prick with a God complex,” - that made me laugh.
loved it!
person JAD
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sex and sweetness, gotta love it
Great chapter again KD!
person me
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting to see how Adam's shields break when enough emotion is directed towards him specifically. It makes me wonder if you are going to have him break down to his basest emotions like you almost had him do before so that he can accept what he has now....

I honestly cant wait to see how they end up...

J
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are very awesome at sex scenes. :D
the revelations of Roth's suicide thoughts and Roth being Adam's first surprised the hell outta me.
Good job!
person lone_child
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for more chapters!
person loving
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adam is coming to stay, he needs roth and he knows that all to well.
person lazyluna
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, they're getting somewhere now! Adam gets called Baby as a petname.... Roth gets Relentless Bastard, haha! Lovin' the dynamic!

LL
person Reike
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahah arrogant prick with a God complex...love it!
Wow does Roth just steam roller in there, Adam really doesn't
stand a chance against the Garrett genes, pushy's in their make-up *smirks*
Loved it!
~R~