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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so worth the little wait. Now I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop....
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great couple of chapters, I hadn't realize I missed any, or you posted more then one! Anyways, I love this story, it really is going along nicely.
Darkladyknight
Darkladyknight
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally roth is getting what he deserved, a good person who can give him what he wants.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God those 2 chaps were so fucken hot. especialy the last one (chap 16) an i hope i get added on to the list to recieve the emails gor the last chapters for this story like the last one wich i might add was absolutely great. adyy: kimmy8503@yahoo.com
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
that's all I can say
that's all I can say
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see where you take this. I can't say enough I LOVE YOUR STORIES. The thought of Roth and Adam both opening up like this is so touching. Keep up the good work. Nona
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth is a man I could honestly fall head over heels in love with. Poor Adam, his live has just been so disastrous and Roth has not had the best of times. But together, OMG!!! From the start, I felt that Roth's story was going to be a roller coaster riding and you have not disappointed. I can't wait to see what Adam's reaction will be when he finally meets the Garrett clan. You are giving me every reason, with this story, to fall in love with the Garrett men all over again.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooo...he broke!!!!! cant wait to finally see him really come out.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and about the correction it is in chapter nine - I sort of copy pasted the paragraph here for you and put the part i was talking about in < > =). Sorry i hadntreplied to this earlier!
Thrilled by the combination of new honesty and the fact he would have Adam for the night, Roth experienced a lightness in himself. So much time had passed since experiencing it,. He descended ahead, and moved quickly to open the car door. Closing it after his guest, he rounded the car and got behind the wheel.
Thrilled by the combination of new honesty and the fact he would have Adam for the night, Roth experienced a lightness in himself. So much time had passed since experiencing it,
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thrilled by the combination of new honesty and the fact he would have Adam for the night, Roth experienced a lightness in himself. So much time had passed since experiencing it, < he almost didn’t know how react.>
it didnt paste properly the first time
it didnt paste properly the first time