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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Reike
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww Roth, I love him muchly...can I have him please?
Along with Walks Softly and Etienne.
I know you're lulling us into a false sense of security...just give
us a heads up yeah? haha! Knowing you it's gonna be explosive!
Great chapter as always, it gave me the fuzzies!
~R~
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, this story is so damn beautiful...i love it just as until you. looking forward for the next chapters....
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that both Roth and Adam care enough for Joseph (an almost total stranger) to make a home for him. Maybe he will get his own Garrett? Is there one waiting in the wings that we haven't met yet? I hope so, he needs one. Maybe Jason and Ridge will help with the renovations for the clinic at the shelter. Ridge was handy with tools, Jason does architectural work, and it does help people in need.
Wonderful work as always!
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I look forward to reading more.

Dark
person DarkDreamer
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing how well those two are interacting.
I'm curious how you're going to put Joseph in the equation... you introduced Jackson into Jenny's life, I wonder who's going to be Joseph's mate?
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow I've missed a lot.
I love their relationship now. it's so sweet and steamy.
can't wait for more. :)
person raksha
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello! you stories is great.and i love Roth's story.

i just finish reading the until you but chapter 63 only.when i check it is already gone.

what happened? is there any site where i can read it?

KEEP IT UP! THANK FOR YOUR STORIES LOVE IT!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet. Seeing both Roth and Adam happy and unyielding, just enjoying nature and themselves, warms my heart. I love reading about them on horseback...I can just picture them having fun with no care in the world...everyone deserves a break sometime. Great update!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth at play. That makes me happy. Hopefully that will have a few more fun things happen for them.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, it was a nice ending to a rainy day at work!

Darkladyknight