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by KristinaDalton

schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth is a shelters' dream...he is absolutely amazing and Adam was right about everything he said about him...I can't wait for Joseph to come and stay with him. Maybe he can help teach the man about self-worth. This is a great story and I can't wait for you next update. I hope you find a beta soon.
person loving
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter and hope you update soon.
person Reike
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww Joseph's a cutie...can I add him to my collection of your characters? haha!
I love how Adam's kinda like a Garrett in the way he steam rollers into people's
emotions too.
And LOL at Roth's God complex, bless him!
Ahh I hope Joseph gets someone nice...and I can tell something bad's gonna happen
pretty soon.
Loved it!
xx
person Jazz
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy lovin they had going on there, got a lot of happy feelings going on there :D and now they have a new family member! yay Joseph is such a sweety, I want him to catch a break and feel loved and happy :( but Nathan is here now!;D
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like joseph he's interesting and i'm glad that he's staying with Roth and Adam. can't wait to read more.
person morgan cian
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Toying with the idea of doing a little three or four chappy bit separately for Joseph and Nathan. The first kiss, sex, that kind of thing. Any interest? It would just be for fun, not publication.

I think that is a wonderful idea, they were just too cute for words, so sweet, so tender even admist an eagerness to cover up the pain, it was fun to watch Nathan get pummeled with a velvet bat that was Joseph. Joseph had me when he went to give Roth head saying that it was all that he had. So I'm sold, I love these characters so.
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter, and I'm interested, Joseph is soo soo cute! I so love both these stories and would love to see you do one where Joesph finds a little happiness!

Dark
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think it a great idea an can't wait if u decide to do it.
person rosie
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, it's me. :) I just wanted to say how glad I am that you've started another story, even though I haven't had a chance to get to it until now (unfortunately--my laptop broke!) Anyways, it seems really good--you rock! Keep writing!
person Rose
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although not a G-man, I do approve of Nathan with Joseph and um...did you really ask IF there was interest in a short about them? Shouldn't the question have been, "How much time will you give me before demanding a story about Joseph with Nathan?" No doubts about your ability this late in the game, KD!