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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person lone_child
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another wonderful chapter!
awww that's so wonderful, roth kicking that guy's ass protecting joseph!
person loving
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Guess joseph is right, there are a lot more predators then you would think especially with him.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looooooool chafing
person Jane r.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter keeps getting better and better :)
person rosie
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's been a great read so far! I just wanted to say that at the beginning of the second part of this chapter (when they get to the stable estate thing) it says that there's a "camera mounted on a pillow" and I was wondering if you meant pillar. Because to me "pillow" doesn't make much sense. :)

Keep writing, because you are awesome!!!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gaaawwwd. Laughed my ass off at that one.

Actually, a pillow cam would be great in this story.

Thanks for pointing that out.
person Ariana7
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Roth found someone he was to sweet to be alone. Adam is perfect for him!
person loving
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good for joseph, going after what he wants.
person me
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....Joseph is such a cute. I think it would be sweet to see what happens between him and Nathan if you do end up writing their little bit. Anyhow, adam seems somewhat domesticated now considering he is a trained killer....hmm. I honestly cant wait to see what pops up now....
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more of Joesph's and Nathans relationship!!! They are seem to be a cute couple already