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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person crazyforkakashi
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He should be beat for running like that. I guess old habbits die hard and he was back helping people. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
person DarkDreamer
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Roth!!!
This storie is so much more dramatic then Until You. When you sad that you were going to write a storie for Roth, I thoght something less traumatic for the poor man.
Anyway, I'm lovind the storie.
person DarkDreamer
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Roth!!!
This storie is so much more dramatic then Until You. When you sad that you were going to write a storie for Roth, I thoght something less traumatic for the poor man.
Anyway, I'm loving the storie.
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no I hope Adam's ok. I have to admit, he is wonderfully caring not to put Joseph and Roth in danger but I'm pretty sure that Roth is going to track him down and let him know he is not alone and they make a better team together. At least I hope Roth reaches him before the bad people get to him. Oh my...I knew there was a twist, and what a good one. I can't wait for your next update. Oh and I hope Nathan is ok and comes home to Joseph safe and sound.
person JAD
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooo
And so the drama begins....dum dum dummmmmmmm
Can't wait for more, as always!
person Aida
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you queen of angst ! You're killing me there...Aida
person loving
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well the past is bound to come up again and it needs to be dealt with if anything can be good.
person Reike
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha I love Roth.
This story is great! I'm loving it alot!
Joseph and Nathan are too cute for words!
xx
person crazyforkakashi
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is truely a wonderful story. The best part for me was ( “In a single night you bagged a man so straight he squeaked when he walked. If you turned purple, he wouldn’t care.”). We all need men like that. Keep it going you are a wonderful writer.
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ACK! I knew something was going to happen soon. Oh Boy! Hopefully he will call the family in for search and rescue of the sexy boyfriend.
Love it. Keep it coming.