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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Aida
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Roth should let it go easily.It's a matter of trust between them.Adam seduced him...well done.I think I want him to beg...LOL Aida
person loving
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roth should definately hold out, make him beg for it.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
geez that was sad.

forgive (cause I'm a total sucker for the mushy stuff) but Adam needs to get it through his head that Roth is fragile, and you know let him in on the important shit. they are in a pretty serious relationship after all.
person Domi
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Relent!Relent!Relent!Relent!Relent!
I love your stories. I read Until You also, but i never reviewed. I figured it's about time.
person JAD
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chappies again, so glad Roth got his man back.
Relent, but maybe still be a little upset bout it all.
I don't know, you're the master!
xxxxxx
person Reike
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He should definately hold out I think!
God give Adam some Beef for what he put him through!
Gah! Poor Roth.
Lovely chapter though
xx
person nonalor
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I love to see Roth in so deep with Adam. Adam is so lucky to be his Baby. I wish I can read more sooner but RL work comes in the way 4 nites in a row at hospital is hard, but it gives me something to look forward to over the weekend. Can't wait. Thanks for writing such a great story, and keep up the good work. Love It. Nona
person lavcea
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Roth should forgive Adam...but he should do it really hard. In graphic Detail. With sweat and lots of moaning.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Forgiven yes, but I think he needs time at least to get a few things clear to Adam. I don't think Roth should relent to Adam until Adam can make a promise not to run off again without discussing his concerns with Roth. I think Roth needs to make that clear and Adam needs to understand and say the words, that, he won't run off again. That way if something does happen and Adam disappears again (with or without note) Roth would know that it was against his will and Adam is in danger.

Now should they share some loving...maybe not just yet...but some cuddle time might be nice until the air is cleared between them. Of course there is always the next night...and some loving is always better if you wait and let it build up ; ).

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next!!!!
person BobbyJ
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Call me a hopeless romantic, but I really just want Roth to give into Adam. I can't stand seeing them hurt. The emotions are so strong in this story it feels like I'm hurting too. It might be selfish of me, but I can't help it. I just want everything to be okay.

Wonderful job so far. I once again apologize for not leaving comments more often. Just know that I'm still reading, and will continue to until the end.