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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person arimi
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really pity Adam, his past is just so heart-wrenching. And all this stuff about the mafia is reminding me more and more of some crime novel, LOL. But it's intersting that way, hope you update soon.
person JAD
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!
*sad puppy dog face*
Sooo sweeeeet. Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh and nice link in with Until You;-)
person Reike
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh this is really hotting up now!
I'm loving it!
Can't wait to see what happens!
xx
person lazyluna
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Awesome! Here's hoping Adam's "parents" don't turn out to be complete losers...but it's lookin' that way. sigh.

Can't wait for more!!!!! :)
person loving
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter was good and i can't wait for you to update.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hook. I just read the first chapter and I think I won't stop until I'm up to date. I used to read Until you but then I went away for a while and couldn't find it anymore, I think is going to be publish isnt it? Congratulations!! Any way, keep up the good work and thank you so much for this wonderful distrations n_n

(sorry for any mistake, english is not my first language -_-')
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who those guys are, whoever they are they seem to be after Adam. Oh I can't wait for your next update.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa what?! you sure have whipped out the drama.
I absolutely loved this whole update. can't wait for more!
person Reike
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh another cliff hanger gah!
Seriously what a place to leave it!
Who was meant to be dead?!
Lovely update as usual.
xx
person sxchampagne
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been away for a while and just got caught up. it's getting real exciting. I can't wait to see what happens with Adam and the men from his past. Also, I don't know if you've already decided but I would love to read the side story about Nathan and Joseph.