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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I love your sories. They are alway perfectly detailed - just enogh for information but not enogh for assurance. Just one critique: I know joseph is greatful but he seems rather sychophantic and like a bellboy, that just seems a little unreal. So I'd say develop him a bit more!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw this is so good, KD. As always I can't wait for even more!!
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww!
The dream scene had me like "poor Adam, I may forgive you for being an
insensitive prick"
I feel like crying now, they're too cute!
Lovely update KD!
R xx
The dream scene had me like "poor Adam, I may forgive you for being an
insensitive prick"
I feel like crying now, they're too cute!
Lovely update KD!
R xx
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, i'm looking foward to discovering more of Adam's past.
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can't wait for more! Adam's past is getting more and more interesting... and it seems like the houseguest number just keeps increasing! :)
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear KristinaDalton, Finally to have time to review for my big brother:=>Roth that he was favorite character too. Surprising to know his lover so special more than himself and his family ^^. But I still wonder He end up with each other. That's good...Roth need exciting love life 555 (^_~) So...hope to read more...Supporting you Foever...
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww
thankies for the update!
thankies for the update!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story!!!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a perfect mix of light-heartedness and seriousness towards the end. Great writing! Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They've created this little family and it's doing so much for them all, and that's a really good thing to see.