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for Before You

by KristinaDalton

person Nona Mcanelly
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad the waiting game is. I hope Joseph will be alright. I just love your stories. Keep up your good work. Nona
person kristina
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am making my way through Before You. I just finished chapter 30. My heart is quaking because Adam and Roth are so in love. Now that Adam has promised not to leave again I am afraid that the next time will be against his will. Such well written sweet torture! I am loving every moment of this story.
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what! no, no, no! You can NOT kill Joseph!
person lazy
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO SAD!!!!
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh no...great scott!...update please! i must know what happens to joseph!
person Rose
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd say that was wrong, but I kind of sensed Joseph would do something like that. Why is it the weakest always think the strongest need bodily protection?

You're not going to let Joseph die, right?
person cee dee
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not Joseph.. well not any of them. I hope all the pirates die or writh in pain forever.
very good chapter-
person lone_child
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noooo don't let joseph die *wails*

thanks for the update, btw~
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter...can't wait to see how this turns out...might i make one suggestion...changing "negro" to "african"...that's all...can't wait for the next update.
person Bianca D.
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I send my condolences about your grandmother; I won't say anything to try to make you feel better because I know it really won't help. So, on to your story, I love that you are adding in these pirates and Adam is all on fire and what not. I am so excited for your next chapter; I can't even describe my anticipation. Hope you update soon.