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It never fails to amaze me how you can take big, macho men and instill sensitivity in them without making them wussy women-wanna-be's. I can totally buy all of these men as real people. Also, you avoid the "to be" verb, have excellent structure, and great dialogue. These men are men. Great work.

nice chapter
like the adam has had it with the house and wants out

Woohoo! Time to kick so ass. Can't wait to see what is in Joseph's background. Hopefully Adam will get some of the answers he is looking for in his past too.

Wow when Roth and Ridge find someone, they are ready to commit whole heartedly. I have to applaud that, they see what they want and who they want and they go after it and don't let anything get in their way. I've had this thought, will Roth introduce Joseph, Nathan and especially Adam to the family? Just wondering...well actually I'm hoping he'll at least have Ridge and Jason come down and meet Adam. I've always thought that he was especially close to those two. Anywho...great chapter and I can't wait for the next and also to see what job Roth has for Naddy.

Aww they got married, so cute.

nice chapter

Joseph's so sweet... and I like when he takes charge he he he.
When is Adan going to have some interaction with Roth's family?

I love the bickering over food.
these chapters were so good, with Roth helping Adam get through his memories.
loved it!

"snow white", now this is going to be interesting. let's see how well she gets along with the boys!

Is there a new member of the family coming along.