rate_review Reviews

I haven't had a chance to read this story for a while until just a few days ago. (That is why I haven't left a review before, unlike your other story where I just didn't review.) Anyways, I really enjoy this story. The characters seem real, as if they are not fiction, but living people that one could walk up to and start a conversation. I also really like how you have tied in Nathan from your other story and partnered him with Joseph; I really like Joseph and his mother-hen qualities. I also like how Adam isn't some pretty, sissy boy that needs to be rescued; he can take care of himself, but leans on Roth and it doesn't make him any less of a man. Just thought I would let you know that I really am enthralled with your work and hope to read another chapter soon.

Ooh..an attack..Wonder who sent those men? Hmm...oh well, update soon please?

Oh Joseph, you make me so happy! "What a bunch of macho jerks!" Haha!

Ohhh, can't wait for more, and seeing the "macho jerks" get all machoey is always fun! :)

Hmm....this is an interesting twist. I am still curious as to what the mutual interests were. Possibly finding the people who hired Adam?

They knew well that negotiating wasn't going to work.

Where is Joseph? Oh and did he say yes to Nathan? Will they be having a double wedding...oh the happiness. I hope Joseph is ok...I know Nat, Roth and Adam took down the men who broke in but there was no sign of Joseph. Can't wait for the next update!

Hey - sorry for the loonnngg absence. I love where the story is going right now, especially that Adam has finally gave in to really be with Roth. And Nathan and Joseph omg - I love that Nathan proposed!!!! They are the cutest ever! I love them….But there was a little problem in the 32nd chapter right after Nathan proposes you jump directly to Adam and Roth arguing over Adam being confined. You cut off directly from one thing to another that I had to re-read it a few times to figure out that it was a complexly different stance. It seemed that Adam blew up right there at the table with Nathan proposing….maybe if you had a ‘Later on that night….’ section to show movement to a different time.

Marriage, so cute.

You're definitely getting me excited now. :-) Thanks for the update!

you know my first girly instinct is to squeal and aww about them getting engaged, but I kinda know better now with your stories.
I can't wait to see how all this unravels.